Paper 1 LR
WWW: A very impressive exam with excellent knowledge shown. The final 20 marker is partially good. EBI: Just a few minor errors to cut out: serif/ sans serif, staying focused on question, a little more detailed reference to CSPs etc. Q1: 1/1 Q2: 7/8 - Use of black model for the image shows that CIF is trying to be modern and diverse. Q3:10/12 - 'why have cotton when you can have silk' shows class, style, elegance and luxury. Q4: 3/6 - Audrey Hepburn ends ad as a hero: subverts stereotypes + reflects modern attitudes towards gender. - CIF: Black male model shows and reflects modern diversity of the UK. Q5.1: 2/2 Q5.2: 5/6 - New posh is sans serif and Tatler is serif Q5.3: 8/12 - People in Britain are obsessed with wealth and money 'she looks good in pearls' -Importance of looking good to women is: 'oops all my clothes fell off' Q6.1: 1/1 Q6.2: 1/1 Q7:6/6 Q8:6/9 - need more reference to Lara Croft Go CSP. Q9: 17/20 - Fix topic sentences and how they develop