Paper 1 LR
WWW: A very impressive exam with excellent knowledge shown. The final 20 marker is partially good.
EBI: Just a few minor errors to cut out: serif/ sans serif, staying focused on question, a little more detailed reference to CSPs etc.
Q1: 1/1
Q2: 7/8 - Use of black model for the image shows that CIF is trying to be modern and diverse.
Q3:10/12 - 'why have cotton when you can have silk' shows class, style, elegance and luxury.
Q4: 3/6 - Audrey Hepburn ends ad as a hero: subverts stereotypes + reflects modern attitudes towards gender.
- CIF: Black male model shows and reflects modern diversity of the UK.
Q5.1: 2/2
Q5.2: 5/6 - New posh is sans serif and Tatler is serif
Q5.3: 8/12 - People in Britain are obsessed with wealth and money 'she looks good in pearls'
-Importance of looking good to women is: 'oops all my clothes fell off'
Q6.1: 1/1
Q6.2: 1/1
Q7:6/6
Q8:6/9 - need more reference to Lara Croft Go CSP.
Q9: 17/20 - Fix topic sentences and how they develop my overall argument.
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